Wednesday, August 10, 2011
I wrote a poem is it good?
You seem to have the art of writing a poem, but there seems to be no continuity to what you are saying. For eg. "tears raindeers" doesn't seem to make sense.There is no word as raindeers. It's wrong. There are animals known as Reindeers. There is no word as masha either. The poem lacks punctuation, vocabulary is not good at all. First get your vocabulary right. Poems need not be grammatically correct, but at least get the words right. I've read poems where poets spell stake for steak and stuff. But over here, the words don't match at all and they don't exist in the dictionary. But, you can try better.
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